I have read this three times now, and it gets better each time. You write exquisite poetry. The imagery was fantastic. I loved "Their eyes met across the distance, he the question and she the answer." That is pure soul love. Then you tell a great story, concluding with "His sorrow filled the empty sky", which is phenomenal and so wonderfully describes a broken heart. Plus, selkies - I have a real weakness for selkies.
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Date: 2024-08-02 08:53 pm (UTC)he the question and she the answer." That is pure soul love. Then you tell a great story, concluding with "His sorrow filled the empty sky", which is phenomenal and so wonderfully describes a broken heart. Plus, selkies - I have a real weakness for selkies.