Oh, wow - I always like your poetry and this was really well done. This is so subtle that, upon re-reading, it's obvious what the ending will be; you make it clear from the fourth line. And going further in, it's almost like you're shining a light directly on it, but it's still hazy, difficult to tell if we're seeing a woman slowly descending into madness or a specter that is (not-so-)blissfully unaware of her situation. I enjoyed this a lot!
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Date: 2021-11-01 04:26 pm (UTC)