Talk about bringing your A game! This was fantastic - through most of the story, I thought these were real salespeople. The dialogue was outstanding and convincing. Then you get to the end to find out that these are the products, who think they do the selling. Brilliant! Your use of products with first names in them (Skippy was my favorite) was great. This story wouldn't have worked with other types of products. The pictures of the characters at the end was great, as was hiding them behind the link so you could finish the story without seeing the pictures. This was also so funny and silly. I loved the distinct personalities you gave each character. This piece has elements of your stories this competition - the humor, the surprise, the wonderful dialogue, and the sheer loopiness of it all. This story should be read twice to get the full fun.
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Date: 2019-05-01 10:23 pm (UTC)