It's always a challenge writing this kind of story-- leaving enough hints so that the character is accurately described (with a little misdirection), but not enough to spoil the ending. And then, of course, if someone goes back and re-reads, everything should only seems "more true" with the added context.
I'm glad you re-read after the pictures! Victor DOES have a lot of gear, doesn't he? I was looking at the various models to decide what to include, and that one was the most awesome choice without crossing over into being ridiculous with features. I look at it and that Homer Simpson drool noise starts up in my head: *Glaghhhh~~~*
And now that you've seen Cole, you can probably understand why those comments about Victor made him wonder if people felt the same way about him. :O
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Date: 2019-05-01 06:56 am (UTC)I'm glad you re-read after the pictures! Victor DOES have a lot of gear, doesn't he? I was looking at the various models to decide what to include, and that one was the most awesome choice without crossing over into being ridiculous with features. I look at it and that Homer Simpson drool noise starts up in my head: *Glaghhhh~~~*
And now that you've seen Cole, you can probably understand why those comments about Victor made him wonder if people felt the same way about him. :O
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!