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rayaso ([personal profile] rayaso) wrote in [personal profile] halfshellvenus 2019-03-18 04:43 pm (UTC)

This was so great! I loved the trolls' dialog, and all the details, like the talking donkeys and, unfortunately, the poor brown bunnies. I also loved the idea that the trolls' beards and filthiness was for a bear-repellent, which seemed to work. At first I thought you were going to make the Fatberg Mountain to be an actual fatberg, made of garbage or sewage, but real cheese was a much better choice and went with the wacky fairy tale world you created. This had so much silliness in it, with the perfect ending.

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