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rayaso ([personal profile] rayaso) wrote in [personal profile] halfshellvenus 2019-01-27 12:09 am (UTC)

This is so wonderful, even after two readings! You have a fantastic way with writing about children and their (sometimes weird) view of the world. Downgrading the kiss to the prettiest girl in school made me laugh, although I wonder what she would say about it. Having a bucket list for the summer would be such a great thing to do at that age. For me, peanut butter and pickle sandwiches are suspect, but peanut butter and pickle relish falls into the "food eaten on a dare" category.

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